I like this book. I want to know what happens next.
You have to suspend disbelief or I don't think it will work. The author needs training in sentence structure, grammar, spelling and punctuation. Imagine speaking to a person who has learned your language to a degree that they can make themselves perfectly understood but you can tell that your first language is not theirs. Something is lost in translation.
To me that is what it is like reading this book. I like the story and the concept. I can accept some of the more far fetched ideas, Hollywood gets away with it all the time and as I said at the beginning, I want to know what happens next. I would give it 4 stars but for the elementary technical mistakes that sometimes ruin the flow of the story.