The clue's in the genre, 'historical' romance, but this book was disappointing as it fell far short of the standard required of 'historical'. Not only did the book have the usual Americanisms, despite being set in England in the 19th century, but the whole structure of the plot and the behaviour of the characters involved felt inauthentic. Ever chapter something happened that rang falsely for the society in which the book was set - this kind of writing might appeal to some but I find it intensely irritating.
So what is the book actually about? It's the start of a series about seven Scottish brothers and sisters whose wayward behaviour has caused their father, a duke, to send them to London with minimal funds to try to redeem themselves. First of the children, Sterling Sinclair, Marquess of Blackburn, is the focus of this book. It starts as a boxing match in which he is participating is stopped by a young woman who is collecting money for widows and orphans of the war at La Corunna. He decides, slightly randomly, to enter an anonymous wager at White's that the Marquess of Blackburn will marry this woman, Isobel Carington, within a short time. The rest of the story involves meetings between Sinclair and Isobel in which they apparently fall in love, Sinclair tries to deal with his money problems and the Elgin/Parthenon Marbles make an appearance.
This story lacked a firm, directive plot and it felt like it rather meandered around, particularly the central love story. The main characters felt very one-dimensional and it was hard to get a hold on their motives. The lapses in historical accuracy were very offputting (for example, Isobel's father is a minister in the Houses of Parliament and is addressed throughout the book as Minister Cornelius Carington which is entirely incorrect; he should be Mr Carington or "The Minister"). I wasn't entirely sure about the point of the Elgin Marbles in this story except to inject a bit of historicity. In summary this felt like a very lightweight book with too many flaws to make it a truly enjoyable read.
Originally published for Curled Up With A Good Book © Helen Hancox 2009