This book was a great disappointment to me, because although I felt it had potential - a compelling story and interesting characters - I couldn't get over the poor editing. The author does not seem to realise that less is more, and insists on constantly telling rather than showing, often in an irritatingly repetitive manner. I found this surprising, as Kay does not seem to be an unskilled or untalented writer, however the novel reads as if it has just been written in one go without the least bit of editing afterwards. On one occasion the tense is abruptly changed from past to present from one sentence to another, which must be a mistake as there is no good reason for it. There are also a couple of chapters when the same happens more deliberately, but I still felt that there was no good reason for a change of tense and it ruined the flow for me. Another thing that irritated me was overuse of the word "though" (at one point I counted it once every two pages). I feel it is a word that should be used as little as possible in serious literature as it sounds unprofessional, and belongs to the category of 'telling' rather than 'showing'.
I enjoyed the first 200 pages or so of this book, but by the time I had come to the middle, I was so irritated that I persevered only because I found the story interesting and wanted to find out how it would end. By the time I had about 50 pages left, I just skimmed through them in a matter of minutes to get to the ending.
This novel could have been pared down by at *least* 100 pages.