I am actually laughing out loud at how Angelica No has completely misunderstood this book and listed so many spelling and grammatical "errors". Oh dear.
The voice of the first-person narrator - Angelica No, please note, this is supposed to be a native Spanish speaker with no English (as he frequently mentions) - so the errors are of a Spanish person's voice being "translated" to render the Spanish into slightly artificial English. It is the internal monologue of a non-native speaker thinking in his own language, NOT an English speaker making a litany of howlers...
This literary artifice is so very well done that suspending disbelief comes as no chore. It was surprising to keep remembering that Alan Warner is a native English speaker from Scotland as his first-person voice of slightly stilted non-standard English is utterly, utterly convincing. The narrative takes the form of a personal history where, through sudden news that he is suffering from a terminal disease (The Condition) the narrator casts a somewhat Proustian look back at his life and the events and the events and emotions that have coloured it - the cruelty, kindness, passion, love and hatred. As all the best-written characters are, Lolo is flawed, supremely engaging and never dull. A truly rounded character, he experiences a range of emotions and reactions and whilst we may not always like him - his behaviour does tend towards the effete and he is rather reminiscent of Niles Crane in Frasier - he engages our sympathy and affection and just as we think we are getting to know him he does or says something quite unpredictable, often something deeply cruel.
One of the strengths of the novel lies in some beautifully written and often extremely moving set pieces describing in beautiful detail certain events in Lolo's life - lunch with the intern in his office, going to see Jaws at the cinema, feeding the stray cats by the shore. As if this engaging narrative weren't enough, we also have Warner's comments on the immigration issue, seen through Lolo's befriending of a starving illegal immigrant Moor, who takes on the role of Lolo's priest, as he hears the "confession" of this man whose life seems, thanks to Warner's gift for storytelling, really quite extraordinary.