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The Wayward Apprentice [Kindle Edition]

Jason Vail
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Stephen Attebrook, a crippled knight facing poverty and ruin, seems condemned to a quiet life when he takes a position as deputy coroner in the small town of Ludlow.

But instead, he plunges into a web of murder and intrigue.

A death Attebrook rules an accidental drowning turns out to be a murder, and he must find the killer with little evidence pointing the way.

Then a commission to return a runaway apprentice pitches him into the midst of a conflict between a rebellious earl and King Henry III that is about to erupt into civil war.

Caught up in the twilight struggle among spies readying for war, Attebrook races to defend the apprentice against a charge of murder while dodging killers in the employ of one of the factions.
Thirteenth century England has never been brought more vividly to life than in the pages of The Wayward Apprentice.

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19 of 19 people found the following review helpful
By Mark
Format:Paperback
Jason Vail's first novel, "The Wayward Apprentice", introduces us to one Sir Stephen Attebrook. An ex-soldier and a lacklustre lawyer, Stephen resides in Ludford at the tavern owned by his clerk, Gilbert Wistwoode, and is the Crown deputy coroner. We open with his being called away from a meal of mutton to the body of one Patrick Carter. Cause of death: knife to the ribs (as we later find out). His corpse is surrounded by the folk who were in the Ludford brewhouse and we are treated to a brief description of medieval England's concept of justice with its jury systems. What seems like a simple drowning is quickly revealed as murder most foul.
In the meantime, Stephen has been engaged by Anselin Baynard to locate and return the runaway apprentice, Peter Bromptone, who has eloped with the beautiful Amicia. The antagonism between the Bromptone family with their patron, Nigel FitzSimmons, and Baynard is pushed to the limit with the firing of the latter's mill. It hasn't helped that Bromptone and FitzSimmons tried to have Stephen ambushed after his pursual of the wayward apprentice.
The other side to the story is revealed by the ex-lover of Carter, Johanna, whose daughter, Pris, is in love with the dead man's son, Edgar. Unfortunately, Johanna has different ideas and is wanting to betroth her daughter to the nephew of the grasping Clement. We get a sense that every character isn't quite revealing the truth and eveything that has happened and will happen is inextricably interlinked. The truth is finally teased out of the younger generation who only wish to be with those they love rather than their more cynical parents who have alternative motives for everything. It means that Stephen finds himself in a duel with FitzSimmons whilst trying to prove that Peter Bromptone hasn't murdered Anselin Baynard who meets a dagger in an alleyway halfway through the book.
We reach a tidy denouement, a story of revenge and family honour. Stephen makes several powerful enemies, for no rich noble likes his murderous laundry laid out for all to see. With his partner in sleuthing, Gilbert, and the gossip-positioned Harry to feed subtle clues to him, Stephen Attebrook is a cautiously welcome addition to the medieval sleuths.
Jason Vail reminds me somewhat of the peerless Susanna Gregory. The setting is eighty-odd years before Matthew Bartholomew and Cambridge, but Vail's pace and easy rhythm coupled with a cast of dozens and a complex unravelling mystery is the closest I've seen to Gregory in considerable time. This is not to say Vail is as good as Gregory, but, if he carries on like this with Sir Stephen in the same settings, it wouldn't surprise me at all if he, one day, is as eagerly sought out by this reviewer as that author is.
Few minor issues:
1) the Kindle version opens each chapter with "Ludlow, September 1262". I suspect each chapter is meant to give an actual day as well as the constant repetition of this is pointless
2) there are some typos in the Kindle version. "Harry's bowel" rather than 'bowl' being somewhat amusing
3) the "erotic" scene in the tavern fairly early on. It's badly done and utterly unnecessary. No more in the next one, please.
Other than that, this author has started pretty well. I'll definitely read the next one.
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8 of 8 people found the following review helpful
Move Over, Cadfael 15 Jun 2011
Format:Kindle Edition
The Wayward Apprentice has an unadorned opening, with an undefined, underlying menace that bodes well for the reader. The prose is graphic and optimally captures the ambience of medieval Ludlow and its environs. The characters develop into three dimensional players, with intriguing but human defects that add to the realism of the work, and the plot, while not convoluted, holds the reader's interest. One minor observation is that the prose could be tightened on occasion--but only marginally and this certainly does not detract from the potency of the work. Satisfying and enjoyable. Robert Davidson. The Tuzla Run.
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6 of 6 people found the following review helpful
Format:Kindle Edition
I bought this because I've a fondness of historical murder mysteries and to be blunt it was very cheap, and I had no real expectations for it one way or the other

Having read it I can't help hoping this is the start of a series

It's quite a gritty, unsentimental portrayal of the period it's set in, with a nice vein of dark humour running through it. The central characters are quite engaging, as is the central mystery.

Certainly it's written in American English and as an English person I must admit the first time I read "trash" instead of "rubbish" it stood out for a moment, but I soon got caught up enough in the story not to notice, and as they wouldn't have spoken or thought in modern English anyway at the time it's set I don't see that it really matters.

I would have to echo other reviewers comments about it needing a bit of a proof read and about that sex scene, which really was very clumsily written and didn't seem to fit in with the rest of the book.

But other than that I thoroughly enjoyed it and very much hope to see more from this author.
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Good effort in a saturated genre
I've a big fan of historical fiction/murder mystery, particularly from the medieval and tudor periods, and having trawled through a huge number of the cheap and cheerful attempts... Read more
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I nearly didn't buy this book.

Disliking hyperbole, I was put off by the boastful book description "Thirteenth century England has never been brought more vividly to... Read more
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Good Fun
As other reviewers have noted the mystery isn't that mysterious, but as Stephen himself admits, he's not much of a detective. Read more
Published 9 months ago by Cas
Not very mysterious
If one is going to market a book as a mystery then it ought to contain some element of, well, mystery in the plot. Read more
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Who is Jason Vail?
Am enjoying this on Kindle, but, as another reviewer has noted, it would have benefitted from proof reading. I have searched for details about the author without sucess. Read more
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