Reading the other review, I wondered if we're talking about the same story.
I like short stories but this, well, this isn't good. I like the idea but it's been rather done-to-death (excuse the pun). The storyline is thin, the characters two-dimensional and it's not helped by the misuse of tenses and complete lack of punctuation.
Has anyone actually checked this?
For example, the title (inside the book) reads "The Tree's". The tree's what? Branch? Roots? Leaves? Fruit?
The ending was also far too contrived (spoiler coming). Was she really not aware of who she was fighting and would they not have objected in a way that would have made her twig?
No, sorry, this was not a good read. Don't bother.