At the beginning of this book I was intrigued by the idea of a magical and warlike people invading a peaceful country and failing to overthrow the natives. As I read beyond the first few chapters, however, I became distracted by the writing style, which is most strongly characterized by paragraphs composed of sentence fragments. It seems that many of the characters think in this clipped and broken style as well. I suspect that the author is capable of writing prose that is devoid of this annoying characteristic, and in fact there are sections (albeit short) that read much more smoothly. Unfortunately, these passages did not make up for the style of the rest of the book. In spite of holes in the plot that stretch the bounds of credibility (see an earlier review about bows and arrows for an example; also consider how much sexual attraction Nicholas could possibly have felt toward Jewel in their first meeting, as she was trying to kill him in melee) the story has some appeal. Not enough appeal, unfortunately, for me to be able to recommend this book. The potential for a good and well-told story, represented by the intriguing elements of the plot introduced early in the book, remains unfulfilled.