Magicians, gypsies, aristocrats and the French Revolution. A beautiful cover. Adventure, thrills, magic. The book promises a lot.
Unfortunately, it is a thoroughly amateur effort. The writing is pedestrian and never lives up to the potential of the story. The time line is not handled coherently - at one point, the book leaps forward by two years. A lot of the time, the chapter starts close to one character, only to change perspective a few paragraphs in. The story is rarely sustained - it sort of hands itself along to the next bit like a relay race of narrative, without really engaging. It reads largely as if it was made up as the author went along - but not in an interesting way. The characterisation is fairly flat, and the dialogue is flatter still. There is magic in this story, but it is never magical / delightful to read. It's a shame. The plot could have been engrossing, had it been handled well. The setting and historical authenticity are the book's only real accomplishments.
The end result is a mess that is not, in my opinion, ready for publication.