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A good story let down by typing errors.
on 9 August 2012
I enjoyed the story, it was one of those ones where I kept finding time to read just a little more. Mystery, some action, socio-political comment. Main characters you can relate to and a decent plot. It worked for me. What definitely detracted from the experience was the grammar. Not just the poor spelling, rampant misuse of apostrophes (an apostrophe with an S is used to indicate possession, not the plural) and other silly mistakes but sometimes problems like the wrong pronoun. Sometimes the author goes even uses the wrong name, leaving you having to re-read and translate the sentence or, particularly towards the end of the book, give up on sentences which make no sense at all. Someone needs to proof-read this book so we can have a version which doesn't distract you with all the typing errors.