The Noise Within has some promising elements, but ultimately proves to lack any real imagination. Combined with pedestrian writing this produces a disappointing and tedious book.
It presents a future of space travel, colonised planets, and a human society recovering from some sort of traumatic civil war. The setting put me in mind of The Reality Dysfunction by Peter F Hamilton, but without the advanced bio-science. Whates throws a pair of main characters into the story: Philip Kaufman is a rich scientist, whose father invented a particularly good star drive, but also dabbled with an AI/Human interface for piloting ships, with disasterous results. Leyton is a black-ops commando with an intelligent gun, who spends much of the book being sent on various missions. Further characters get brought in for short periods, and one, Kethi, seems to be intended as a future main character.
It's necessary for a book of this type to grab your attention with at least one interesting character, and this is where it falls down. Leyton has potential, and his action sequences are competent, but he never really develops. Kaufman is downright tedious, a spoilt brat grown up with a chip on his shoulder about his father's old AI ship. Whates shows attempts to develop his characters, but seems only able to produce the odd synopsis of their lives rather than writing it into their narratives. The worst example of this is when Kethi encounters someone, and Whates tells us, in one pithy paragraph, that they're good friends, he is madly in love with her, and she will never reciprocate. It's just a cliche chucked on the page with no thought or craft, and never referred to again.
Leyton shows just enough interest to drag you through the opening half of the book, and at this point a tech-orientated writer should have at least have impressed you with his cool new ideas. Not so. It's all very ordinary. There are planets, and ships, and some AI, and it's all stuff that was done years ago: personas in cyberspace - Snow Crash; dead people's personas in cyberspace - Reality Dysfunction series; AI gun - Against a Dark Background; Wormholes - everyone. The worst example is a lovingly described moment when Kaufman and someone else knock their wrist-computers together to become electronic friends. That's not even the future, that's iPhones with Bump installed!
The actual plot eventually winds it way towards assembling the main characters on the AI ship Kaufman's father lost years ago. At this point I was expecting some cool revelations and reveals. Well, no. Despite there being no mention of it on my copy of the book, this is clearly the start of a series, and any real information is clearly to come in later installments. There's a big event, which I won't spoil, which doesn't really tell you much apart from that you'll be shelling out for more books.
Despite the ranting above, it's not actually a terrible book, it's just deeply average. Much worse has been written before, and will be again. There's even a chance that Whates will find his feet and produce good work. But this is a mess of non-ideas and undeveloped characters, tied together with pedestrian prose. I'd buy it to read it on the train for a pound, maybe.