Litch, Mark Hudson's tragic hero in "The Music in my Head," is a complex and memorable character. He manages to be simultaneously reckless and timid, cynical and vulnerable. At times he seems worldly and self-assured, totally at home in his adopted West African environment (which is Dakar, Senegal in all but name); then in the blink of an eye he feels out of place, threatened, and utterly at sea. This may seem an unbalanced portrayal to some readers. But having lived through similar trials in similar places as Litch, I felt these contradictions strike very close to home.
Litch's (or rather, Hudson's) descriptions of N'Galam (or rather, Dakar) are off-beat, witty, and deadly accurate, from the haughty and stylish women to the surly restaurant service--specifically, the waiters who act as though filling your coffee cup is an "indignity for which they will one day pay you back tenfold."
Litch's personal odyssey into the music business of Tekrur (or rather, Senegal) allows him to vent his frustrations to the readers about the people and places he encounters, all while revealing his own inadequacies and failures as a man. I found myself alternately wanting him to succeed and hoping for him to get his comeuppance.
This may seem well-trod literary turf: the world-weary white man snarling about Africa, something we've seen too often. But Mark Hudson's deeply flawed narrator is, I think, a sort of commentary on that genre: he's so blind to his situation, despite his extensive knowledge and experience, that his credibility (and by extension, that of similar Western adventurers in Africa) is automatically suspect.
The novel isn't everything it could be, and I finished it with a vague sense of dissatisfaction that I still can't articulate. Still, it's an enjoyable trip thanks to its complicated hero and his ripping commentary on the "world music" scene and those who populate it.