According to the blurb on the back cover this book is "a comic novel" and as such I was expecting a laugh or two. However, after reading all 283 pages I am still waiting for my first laugh.
Ok, so it's not funny but it still might be a great work of literature. Sadly, no.
There are almost as many commas as there are words; most sentences peppered between them.
Or as the author would probably write...
There are almost, but not quite, as many commas, irritating for sure, as there are words with, surprisingly, most sentences, as this one, peppered, liberally, I might add with irritation, may I say very irritating, inclusions between them.