STORY BRIEF:
JT is a female sportswriter just starting out, working for a sports magazine. A tabloid prints a fake picture of her being naked with two baseball players. While waiting for the negative publicity to die down, her boss sends her to Gilbeytown for three weeks to do a story on the Beavers, a struggling independent baseball team. Gilbeytown went belly-up after the collapse of the steel industry in the 1950s. The local mayor wants to get rid of the Beavers, tear down their crumbling stadium, build a new stadium, and coax a higher ranking team to move to town. Several accidents have happened to the Beavers' players and property. The coach thinks they are jinxed. Tommy is a major league baseball pitcher for the Portland Galaxies. He happens to be visiting Gilbeytown, his hometown, while JT is there. He's keeping secrets from JT about why he is there and his career plans.
REVIEWER'S OPINION:
This felt more like a mystery than a romance, but there was a romance occurring. For some reason I wasn't pulled into the relationship as much as I would have liked. I'm wondering if it was because the two characters were interacting with the plot and the events surrounding the mystery more than they interacted with each other. They meet, are physically drawn to each other, don't talk much, and then they separate. Later, circumstances bring them together, but again there is almost no talking. He's trying to keep everything secret from her because she is a reporter. She asks questions, but doesn't get any answers. I love entertaining dialogue in stories, but there isn't much chance for this since the two main characters don't communicate much. However I did love Tommy's character, his dreams, his actions and his caring for local kids.
DATA:
Story length: 329 pages. Swearing language: strong. Sexual language: strong. Number of sex scenes: 6. Total number of sex scene pages: 16. Setting: current day primarily Gilbeytown, Pennsylvania. Copyright: 2008. Genre: contemporary sports romance.
CAUTION SPOILERS (without names):
The mystery was good, but I was disappointed in the ending. There were three bad guys. One bad guy goes to jail. A second bad guy is fingered, but he denies doing anything wrong, and I didn't know what would happen to him. I also didn't know his motivations or what he was getting out of it before he was caught. He made a phone call to a third bad guy. The police planned to look up the phone number he called, but the author doesn't tell us who it was. The author later hints at who the third guy was, but doesn't tell what proof is found or what happens to him. I also never learned who the author of a certain newspaper article was. The ending was not finished.