A (female) friend of mine recommended this book to me years ago and it has been collecting dust since I ordered it from Amazon back in 2007. Cleaning out my closet, I discovered it and decided to give it a go and ... oh dear. This is not a good book at all for so many reasons.
For starters, Cecilia makes the crucial mistake of idealising her "male hero" Jarred far too much. Flawless characters are flat, dull, uninteresting and simply don't allow much room for development and to do this to the main character is a grave sin.
The book also reeks of pretentiousness - especially the dialogue. Using exaggerated posh language like "I'faith, you are too kind - but pray, do not trouble yourself" or "As a man of honour I could not call you thus". Despite all the fancy words (which surely exist to make the story feel more romantic than it is) she should have focussed on her basic grammar mistakes instead!
The third big problem, is the romantic bits. She attempts to keep the readers in suspense while dipping them into nauseating amounts of sugary romantic nonsense. Entire pages will be about how a single brush from Lilith sends Jarred reeling (more likely, it makes him pitch a tent but hey, let's pretend he's a perfect prince and has perfect control over the down-stairs department, eh? Unlike every other guy in existence). But while I appreciate well-written romance in a story, it's just not done well here. With the main character being so flawless, it feels, again, like a girl's wet dream and just has no link to reality. The few attempts to add some tension to the romantic bits, are merely there to make Jarred look even more flawless.
Besides these three big mistakes, there's more smaller ones as well: the story is riddled with elements that don't make that much sense, some parts are screaming for more detail are left without while other parts are flooded with detail where there should be far less. The entire flow of the story is wrong as well - the pace goes from very very slow to suddenly very fast and the author often picks the wrong moments to go fast or slow it seems.
In general, I wanted to give the book a chance (for the sake of my friend, mostly) but it's just a big disaster. There's nothing original here, nothing inspiring, it's filled with dreadful mistakes and while it may appeal to girls who are dipping their toes into fantasy and love a good cheap romantic novel, it's certainly NOT for any regular fan of fantasy series.