I had high hopes for Sir Tam Dalyell's Bt. autobiography. Renowned as one of the late-20th Centuries great parliamentarians (like Tony Benn or Edward Heath), my hope was that Sir Tam's reflections on his life story would off some insight into both the man and his life both in and outside Parliament. However, what we have is a text in desperate need of both a good proof-reader and editor.
The first part of the book, looking at Sir Tam's antecedents as Baronets and residents of the House of the Binns (his ancestral seat) is both self-indulgent and uninformative, mainly because Sir Tams writes as though he were authoring a `who's who' guide. Too many times we are treated to sentences which run along the lines of `Sir X, who was my tutor/ doctor/ cook and who would later become distinguished Professor/ House Master/ Surgeon to the Monarch etc.' (Many of these descriptions are up to a paragraph long, meaning that the book becomes more of a biographical dictionary than an memoir and loses much of the sense of the narrative). It would be fair to say that not many people will have had the opportunity in their lives to have met so many august personages and with his constant name dropping (like confetti at a wedding) it gets rather tiresome after a while.
At other times we are expected to have a working knowledge of the Scottish nobility, e.g. we are informed that Mr X is one of the Caithness X's, as though this is famous family, known to all. This style may be Sir Tam's own, he was after all brought up as a member of the Scots nobility in pre-war Scotland, however, a good editor would have been able to iron out these stylistic problems, as well as cutting back on the name-dropping/ mini-biographies, as mentioned above.
Another problem with Sir Tam's book is the tone of his writing - there is far too much descriptive memoir, but little or no reflection or regret. Sadly this means that Sir Tam comes across as being self-satisfied rather than as someone who is reflecting on a life well lived. For such an evidently intelligent man, this is quite a let-down and for a book whose retail price is £25, unforgiveable. Whereas Sir Tam may have been a great Parliamentarians of our age, he will not be remembered as a great writer of autobiography, as say Tony Benn or Stephen Fry have been and I fear his book will rapidly be relegated to the remainder book shops/ second-hand book shops of Westminster.