I am sure it was all based on a good idea, which is why I persevered, but wish it had not seemed to be the first draft.
I found this very difficult to read.
Not the subject, but the fact it did not seem to have been edited / proof read. Words were often not in the right order and names of characters were, on at least one occasion, confused. Sentences had to be re read to get the meaning - like a word puzzle. Repetition of 'Sir Adam' at one stage was excessive, as were some excessive description of irrelevant facts. All this made the start, and well into the body of work, so slow it took perseverance to get to the end - which was over in a flash.