I'm unsure whether this is Debbie Taylor's first foray into fiction, particularly historical fiction. Whatever the case, I was a little disappointed in this novel, as other reviewers have liked it and had given it glowing reviews. After a good start full of vivid descriptions of life on a ship sailing to the Colonies, the story becomes sluggish and dawdles, as we enter the world of the harem, and Helen transforms from a malnourished Irish lass, to a well-fed "cow like" woman, ready for her first sexual encounter with the Emperor. The first part of the novel is the most effective, when Helen is taken captive by pirates and then sold into slavery, and the descriptive passages are indeed wonderfully atmospheric with "the sour smell of vomit, the sup of stenches, and the rats nibbling in the rotting rubbish."
Once ensconced the harem, Helen is discovered by Microphilius, a witty, softhearted dwarf who also purports to be Scottish. Microphilius overseas the harem and the needs of the Emperor himself but jealousies and envy starts to run amuck, when Microphilius develops a crush on the red headed, green eyed, and pale skinned beauty from Scotland. Taylor portrays the harem of the Emperor as a mystifying, voluptuous and forbidding place where women of all shapes and sizes spend their days washing their hair, making themselves up and preparing themselves for being chosen to "make sex" with the Emperor. With their "tattooed faces" and "powerful thighs", all the women think of is the "clothes, the paint, the dancing – it's all for sex, to make them good for sex, and for carrying babies." Taylor also does do a good job of showing the bitchy political intent along with the strained and unlikely friendships that Helen develops with the other women. And with Microphilius's help, Helen gradually negotiates the politics of the harem and eventually competes with the Emperor's favour. A kind of whodunit follows when Helen is forced to confront poison, death and danger as she is selected to become the Emperor's fourth queen.
Although Taylor raises some interesting questions about the body and soul: "what is the body except clothing for the spirit, the fleshy barrier dividing spirits from one another", the story is generally quite dull, tedious, and un-absorbing. Too much time is taken in setting up the premise for Helen's first sexual encounter with the Emperor, which isn't really that exciting anyway, and Taylor's style seems just so cluttered and overly descriptive in all the wrong places. The narrative doesn't flow, as gracefully and mellifluously, as it should. There is no doubt that historical fiction is a hard medium to get right, but I'm not sure whether The Fourth Queen is a particularly successful example of this medium. If you want to read some good, high-quality historical fiction that has been published recently, read Sara Dunant's The Birth of Venus.
Michael