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Joshua Dagon
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Book Description

15 Sep 2007
Nicholas Reynolds had messed up: he'd taken two party drugs that didn't get along with each other. Now, his glamorous Saturday night plans had been reduced to throwing up in a thin, lightless alley. Up until tonight, Nick had been doing well enough, even by Los Angeles standards. A model-slash-actor of respectable success, he was young, healthy, very attractive, and the hub of his requisite clique. He was generally popular and appreciated although perhaps not enough by the guy he was dating who, interestingly, insisted they were not dating. Though, what made this particular evening truly remarkable for Nick was not his life-threatening overdose. No, it was the enormous demon who also thought Nick's lightless, Hollywood alley might be a good place to hide... In his triumphant first foray into full-length novels, Joshua Dagon has unleashed the rich and compelling tale of the fallen angel, Marbas, and the circle of friends who risk everything to oppose a dark and growing evil. Set in the vainglorious world of the Los Angeles club scene, these novels adeptly confront dogma, addiction, ambition, and revenge with the powerful forces of optimism, friendship, redemption, and above all, love. By the end of The Fallen, readers are whole-heartedly caught up in the lives of the characters, and upon completion of Demon Tears, they long for another chance to laugh and cry with Joshua Dagon's beautifully crafted characters.

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  • Paperback: 330 pages
  • Publisher: Breur Pub (15 Sep 2007)
  • Language: English
  • ISBN-10: 0978995503
  • ISBN-13: 978-0978995508
  • Product Dimensions: 21.4 x 13.8 x 1.7 cm
  • Average Customer Review: 3.5 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (2 customer reviews)
  • Amazon Bestsellers Rank: 3,853,896 in Books (See Top 100 in Books)

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2.0 out of 5 stars Needs an editor to chop out the waffle 19 Feb 2012
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I wanted to like this novel, but I have just waded to half way through and added it to my 'did not finish' collection.

The plot and premise were very strong, and the writing style and dialogue convincing. The main issue for me was that there were vast tracts of waffle about nothing of any interest. Unusually for my tastes I have to say 'way too much show, not enough tell'. It was a bit like reading "Wind in the Willows" but with drug addicts instead of moles.

If these troublesome sections were meant to sow seeds for later development, I'm afraid the crop was buried under a surfeit of fertiliser. For example, it is made clear very early on that there is some heavy and dangerous drug use going on amongst the protagonists, however the author's recurring discussion of drugs and their use (and names, and how to take them, and their effects ...) was simply tedious. In one scene the group of friends are eating out, and drugs are taken during the meal. Irrespective of how significant this is to plot or character development (although the 'lifestyle' has been made abundantly clear by this point) the scene - as much of the novel - plays out like a six-year-old's diary : first one naughty boy does drugs (with associated commentary from peers, then the next one and then, yes, one by one the reader has to sit through a repeat. The reader simply does not need this level of detail or repetition.

There are some interesting discussions about relationships and philosophy, but like the plot these communications from the author also suffer from the generally poor 'signal to noise ratio'.

Another reviewer likened the style to Douglas Adams.
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Brilliant urban fantay California-style, when a group of chic and drug-acquainted clubgoers meet with a fugitive demon-or fallen angel,if you like. Meanwhile from the Vatican Bishop Robert conducts a delicate investigation on the mysterious demise of a model student,whose last tape (tape? wouldn't it be a You-Tube video, nowadays?)is a rambling tirade about demons. The two storylines will interact dramatically, and for our friends Nick, Darren, Thea and Eddie times are going to be interesting indeed.
Written with a brilliant, humorous style reminiscent of Douglas Adams, original and intriguing as Clive Barker's stories, sensual as Storm Constantine can be, this novel, is certainly worth reading!
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2.0 out of 5 stars party boys and drug culture 23 Dec 2012
By NC:theothergardenstate - Published on
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I only got to 14% on my Kindle, then returned the book, so take this review accordingly. (Discount it entirely if you wish.) The reason I am presuming to write a review at all is that the downloaded sample was not representative of the content up to that 14%, and neither was the posted description. These are two of the three things I check to determine if I might find a book interesting. The third is of course the reviews. At this writing, there was one critical review (2 stars) by a reviewer I respect a great deal, but it seemed that it might perhaps be an overly-intellectual analysis. And then there was the counterpoint 5-star review that declared the book "Awesome." So I took a chance. But now I understand that 2-star review completely, and I think it was spot-on. But I'll offer perhaps a more low-brow assessment.

The prologue involved a demon and a human. Then we jumped to the first chapter, and it began with a party boy leaving a club to find a place to be sick to his stomach without making (more of) a spectacle of himself. And he encountered a different demon, and they struck up a conversation. Our protag did however think that the creature was a product of his drug-fueled mind. At this point, I was intrigued and eager (despite some bizarre conversation about which designer made party boy's trousers). The writing was crisp and flowed well, and I enjoy the combination of the supernatural with gay protagonists.

Then we jumped back to the club and met several characters that this young man hung out with. And for about 30 pages, we learned about how vapid those friends were, and about recreational drugs, their use and abuse, their code names, what a particular drug felt like as it started to manifest it's high, how much to take without getting too wasted, the best strategy for buying them, that alcohol is for wusses, what L.A. club culture and pecking order is like, and on and on about freaking drugs.

Then we were back with the demon and club boy #1. Their conversation was less ranging this time, and we heard a lot of party boy's internal dialogue about how his body felt under the influence, and again whether or not this conversation was real. Then we flipped back to the club, where the topic turned to ... no, I won't spoil it for you. Can you guess?

If you are intrigued by hip, edgy, trendy (not) drug culture and the people who can afford to throw away money on such extravagant and dangerous recreation (and of course if you like some supernatural mixed in with your gay protags), you could find this book delightful. If I had any idea that this was going to be such a major theme, I never would have bought the book in the first place. But again, the description and the downloaded sample were just not indicative. So ... now you know.
4 of 5 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars Awesome 28 Feb 2010
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This is a review for both Fallen and Demon's tears

I can see how this author can deserve the criticism of being extremely wordy and needing tighter edit in some places for both books. But no, I am not taking the stars off for this. I am not writing a review as a professional literary critique, I am writing a review as a reader, and ESL reader at that, so while I can notice some glaring linguistic problems, my main issue is whether the book satisfied me. And this one and its sequel "Demon's tears" delivered such satisfaction and more. I love the books that play with fallen angels' mythology and do some creative spin on it, I especially love the books which dare to be sympathetic to fallen angels, it is appealing to me. I love how human boys (Nick and his friends are portrayed), how compassionate this author seems to be to basically all of his characters. It is a wonderful thriller that as other reviewer noticed just happen to have gay characters as main players, it is a love story too, story of understanding each other, your good and bad sides, story of wanting to grow, to redeem oneself, I loved it.
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2.0 out of 5 stars wandering in the dark 4 Nov 2008
By Furio - Published on
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This is the first novel in a series of two.
Its basic assumption is fine and fairly original: the interaction between a powerful Judeo-Christian age-old devil and a modern-day group of gay young men in a dissolute Los Angeles. The potential for interesting plot and character interaction is undenyable.

That said, Mr Dagon (is this a pen-name? Dagon is the name of a powerful philistine deity of fertility) seems to be rambling rather aimlessly among rather heterogeneous pursuits. Is he attempting a portrait of contemporary life in LA with a special focus on the city's immoral ethics? Or is it the depiction of the LA juvenile gay world and underworld? A new kind of fantasy? A new-agean essay on religions? Or perhaps a medical short essay on the effects of recreational drugs?

I am being intentionally strict here, of course, but this author seems in serious need of disciplining his literary efforts and of a good editor.
Page after page is dedicated to a rather terse description of several drugs and their effects on the human psyche. What is the goal of so many pages? They are useless to convey the sense of young people idling their life away to escape a harsh reality and a quite necessary search for their real self; they are not judgemental but at the same time they do not make allowances.
What is the author's opinion of his characters? He seems constantly uncertain whether to depict them objectively, leaving the reader to judge for himself, or whether to express his own.

This indecisiveness involves every theme in this book.
Mr Dagon seems unable to pursue a narrative goal consistently. As a result the pace of the action falters and characterization, supposedly the driving force of the narrative, is unconvincing.
The potentially rich supernatural element is far from fully exploited which is a real waste.
So much more a pity because the writing is not bad at all.
2 of 5 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars different 17 Jun 2009
By snails - Published on
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drug education mixed with religion. what's not to like? the end seems to fall apart by trying too hard, but all in all two fun reads
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