This is the third book I have read by Mr. Moffat, the first being the wonderful "Before Scotland" and the second being the geographically wider-ranging (and also excellent) "The Sea Kingdoms". "The Faded Map" is similar in subject matter and tone, but feels less polished and ultimately less satisfying.
In "The Faded Map", Moffat narrows his geographical focus to the regions of what are now southern Scotland and northern England. He is concerned with the history of this area from the time of Pytheas around 320 BC to the effective end of the kingdom of Strathclyde, sometime in the late 11th century. Rather than giving a more conventional narrative account, however, Moffat weaves back and forth through time, showing how place-names have survived or changed over the centuries, or how religious or cultural centers have maintained continuity - or failed to do so.
Moffat drives home the point that "Scotland was never inevitable" by demonstrating the power shifts in the region, and urging the reader to look beyond modern borders to see the older realities. No doubt much of the book would resonate more strongly with a reader who is from the area himself - or at least more familiar with it than an American with an amateur interest in early medieval history. As it was, even though I consider myself fairly well-educated on the topic (I knew about Strathclyde, Bernicia, et al. before this book), I occasionally felt that I wasn't appreciating the "high notes" Moffat was hitting. The map included with the book did not help, as several locations mentioned in the text were not listed.
Apart from this, other aspects of "The Faded Map" kept me more distanced from this book than Moffat's others. The back-and-forth, the way Moffat links the past to the present, sometimes seems jarring. Where I was hoping for a more comprehensive discussion of the way things were in the period, Moffat interjected accounts of archaeological discoveries and expeditions. This sort of thing worked better in his previous books, but here I found myself losing the thread of chapters occasionally; as a result, I took several long breaks from the book. Finally, some typos and unusual punctuation choices made some sentences difficult to follow.
Moffat's enthusiasm for his topic is unmistakable, and the discussions of Dark Age kings and battles are fascinating. I particularly appreciate his willingness to speculate on political matters such as alliances, motivations for battles, and the relative strengths of kingdoms. Since our sources for the period are so scant, it is interesting to see someone try to flesh them out. "The Faded Map" also gets points for its overall layout, which includes several pages of gorgeous color photographs of the landscape and important sites, along with the "offset boxes" of text that serve to illuminate tidbits of information (though sometimes the relevance of these was not apparent).
About halfway through "The Faded Map", it occurred to me that it could have benefitted from stronger editing. Moffat's love for his subject, and his clear talents as a writer, could have shone through more brightly had he been encouraged to trace a more "conventional" path through his story of lost kingdoms, with fewer digressions to modern times. Moffat himself knows the difficulty of recounting this history, as is evident from the apologetic opening sentence of the Introduction: "Very little certainty, only occasional phrases of continuity and hardly any clarity at all are the sorry string of characteristics to be found everywhere in this book." To be sure, it's the nature of the territory. But, as enjoyable as this book is, it left me wishing there had been slightly more order imposed upon this sprawling tale of kings and saints, battles and castles - and old stones that punctuate the landscape of a fascinating part of the world.