William Monk wakes up in hospital with no idea how he got there or who he is. He has no memory of his life before the accident and the face looking back at him in the mirror is that of a stranger. Soon enough it becomes clear that he is a detective in the London police force, and an exceptional one at that. Fearing he might lose his job, he hides his memory loss as he tries to solve the brutal murder of socialite Joscelyn Grey.
Trite and clunky right from the beginning, this book was a serious struggle to finish. I was hoping the ending would be clever enough to redeem its appalling quality, but sadly that was not the case - Just an advance warning in case you make it half-way through and wonder if it's worth carrying on. It's not.
The main issue is the language. I've already mentioned its triteness, which was almost unbearable. I found myself rolling my eyes at descriptions such as people's eyes blazing with anger or voices being tight with grief. Emotions such as 'an extra awareness', 'startling softness', 'a chill, nameless fear', 'a desperate, painful relief' and 'a flutter of hope' all flash across their features, and their voices often 'grate with the intensity of their emotions' or are 'thick with anger'. At one point one of them even 'raises a sarcastic eyebrow', and another one is so overcome that all she can do it sit still and 'nurse the pain within her'. A bit later someone's pride is 'seared beyond bearing' and someone else's eyes were 'devastatingly clear'. All so banal and dramatic that they turn the characters into gross caricatures.
This one-dimensional view applies to the whole book: upper-class men are all described as masculine brutes, their wives and female relatives are either trembling, delicate beauties or head-strong spinsters. All the villains are rat-like or fat with grossly exaggerated cockney dialects, and even Monk himself feels like a cartoon: very tall and strong with 'hypnotic grey eyes'.
And the murder-mystery itself is pretty thin, which I suppose is why countless pages are filled with random ramblings rather than actual content. I don't know how may times we had to read about people entering or leaving 'the withdrawing room', or how many pages are spent detailing their ruminations on how awful the Crimean war was, or Monk's quarrels with his boss. If all that stuff was cut out we'd have a 30-page novella, which would probably be a great deal better than this 400-page headache.