With the first book in the inspector Chen series, Liz Williams introduced a clever, thought out world of oriental occult police work, and the book was a real gem.
however, book 2 in this series, The Demon and the City, is not a patch on that first novel.
yes its written well, interesting prose, lots of nice ideas and the oriental world and main characters are great.
but there have been some changes that really detracted from the things i loved about the first one. Firstly 'Inspector Chen' himself is absent from more than half the novel, replaced by the bubbling Zhu Irzh (who is fine as a character but not as great) and with him disappears the police procedural element of the story for that half. What follows is a muddled adventure story, set mildly within the boundaries of police work.
the plot is also extremely convoluted, random events, non explained characters and happenings make it a struggle to understand and chapters are spent explaining what happened last chapter - very dull.
Williams has also introduced a larger cast - at least 4 new characters - to begin with these are interesting (you assume they are a part of the investigation) but they soon seem to be more important than that - but no more compelling. They have nothing to do with Chen. One wonders why they replaced Chen to no effect - when i pined for Chen to come back. it seems from the ending that most of these characters are back in the next installment - which is a real shame - its not really the Chen novels anymore. Bring back the police work, bring back the plot, the interest.
in short, a muddled convoluted plot that races to a disastrous somewhat pointless finale, a collection of new and dull characters and little to no Chen! it is nicely done and written well. i just hope what i loved from Snake Agent is back in Precious Dragon.
7/10
(Snake Agent got a 10)