This was the Star Trek film that bombed - and, in tandem with the flaccid final spin-off 'Enterprise', all-but killed the Trek franchise. Many of the fans are vitriolic in their hatred of Nemesis and, as for the general public, judging by box office figures hardly any of them bothered to see it. Personally, I was surprised at the amount of scorn that was heaped upon Nemesis. I actually rather enjoyed it when I went to see it, although I was of course very much aware of its flaws, of which there are a great many.
It has some major pluses, to be sure (and for which reason this review has just scraped a three star rating and not a two). Stuart Baird's directing is excellent and he does a good job with the material he's given. The action sequences are brilliantly executed and there's an intensity and darkness reflected in the lighting and cinematography. The cast give their all and the effects are a distinct improvement over Insurrection. When Nemesis is good it's enticing, creepy, dark and intense.
The problem can be summed up in one word: the screenplay (or, OK, two words!). It might have sounded like a good idea to hire an Oscar-winning screenplay writer who happened to be a Trek fan, but sadly Logan's script is a meandering, unfinished mess. There are some good ideas at the core, but sadly the execution doesn't do them justice: the script is patchy, unfocussed and meandering, with about as many plot holes as there are stars in the sky. The notion of Shinzon as a Picard clone is inspired, but it doesn't quite work thanks to the patchwork script: their interaction lacks punch and is exceedingly repetitive and unfocussed. Tom Hardy does a decent enough job as Shinzon, but as a villain he doesn't quite cut it: he comes across as more of a sultry adolescent than a dangerous villain. His quest to destroy Earth seems totally without motivation and, as a result, falls utterly flat. A Borg cube or a Dominion assault force heading toward Earth would elicit some degree of tension, but Shinzon in his Scimitar? Yeah, whatever. The fact it takes the Scimitar SEVEN MINUTES to load up its supposed superweapon is just laughable and immediately all tension flew out the window. This is a serious storytelling error and could have been easily fixed if Logan had put a bit more thought into it.
Brent Spiner also had a hand in the script and a rather self-serving one at that: the B4 storyline is rather pointless and, like many aspects of this film, is recycled from previous storylines (I can't believe no one even mentions Lore). While Data gets to make a heroic sacrifice, in a virtual remake of The Wrath of Khan's climax, the end result is disappointingly unemotional. Witness the weak memorial scene and compare that with Spock's heartbreaking funeral scene in Star Trek II. The final scene, which uses B4 as a potential reset button is just an insult and, all in all, this is a lousy send-off for the Next Generation characters.
The more I think about Nemesis the more I get annoyed by all its many deficiencies; deficiencies that could easily have been corrected had someone taken Logan, given him a firm shake and told him to brush up his half-baked screenplay. Somewhere inside Nemesis is a great film struggling to get out. There are flashes of greatness: as I noted, the directing, production, effects, performances and music are all first-rate. To begin with the pace is quite well-judged: but sadly, like a struggling old car that's ready for the scrapheap, every time it musters some speed, it abruptly chugs to a halt again: and in this case that's due to Logan's meandering script. If the script had been reworked, tightened and resequenced and the dialogue polished, Nemesis would have actually been a pretty darn good film. But it's futile to dwell on 'if only'.... As it stands, this is not a bad film by any stretch and is more or less entertaining throughout but, considering how good it could (and should!) have been, it's deeply disappointing. 3 stars seems quite generous for such an unceremonious departure for the Next Gen crew after 15 years. But, it could have been worse I guess and thankfully this film, while one of the most disappointing of the Trek films, is still massively better than Star Trek V. Thank heaven for small comforts.