This book had a lot more pace and action to it than part one, which was a nice surprise. I think as the eloquent Mr Roy put it though, there's still far too much romanticising and Astall can be a little bit OTT at times with her almost bipolar attitude swinging between holding back tears and hugging people.
I did commend Golden on bringing the various plot threads together, and especially on the increased pace of the book around page 200 until the end. It's good to see that the seemingly unrelated plots introduced in Old Wounds were actually leading towards the main plot, rather than just giving Janeway and the others not on Voyager something to do.
There are a couple of things that bothered me though - I'd worked out where the Paris story was going early on, and it seemed a bit convenient and cliched to me. Also the characters seemed to keep calling the Maquis traitor Arak Katal by his 'friendly' name, rather than Arak, which struck me as odd.
It did seem to take the crew - and only two of them at that! - quite a while to start questioning Chakotay's behaviour. It makes me think the new security chief isn't up to the job!
I was taken aback again at how quickly the book was resolved - literally in the last couple of pages, as with The Farther Shore. I was hoping that all the plot threads of the relaunch to date would be tidied up and new ones allowed to start with the upcoming Full Circle (under a new author's supervision). Particularly Libby Webber's story.
I'm having a hard time telling if the mole she was chasing in Homecoming is still the same mole as in Spirit Walk, and if so - why no more mentions of selling information and technology to the Orion Syndicate, as it doesn't really seem to fit with what the mole was doing in this book.
Other than that, I think this was a pretty entertaining conclusion to the Spirit Walk story and I'm looking forward to more.