Being nearly a life-long fan of the Original Trek Series, I looked forward to reading this book, however, at one stage, I nearly gave up on it. I also had a habit in the beginning of falling asleep, such was the soporific effect of the writing style. Thankfully, things began to hot up once Mr Spock figured out how to get the Arch working. I could have kissed him! He saved the book from becoming dire.
I would have appreciated more characterization. I felt the author simply assumed that everyone knew the personalities of everyone on board the Enterprise, therefore, disregarding the need to show us more about their characters. I felt the author could have written more. Especially in the beginning, there was an abruptness when it came to getting to know what was going on. And those Petraw people, I really couldn't get into them at all. They were very cardboard; Ming the Merciless; cheap science-fiction story types of aliens which left me feeling nothing for them. Maybe that was the author's intention, I don't know. Likewise, I felt there was a wooden quality to the Enterprise crew; a few lines here and there about how they felt; what was going on inside to motivate them. Ho hum, not the full blooded Starship Enterprise stalwarts I have come to expect.
Having said all that, I did read the book all the way through and certainly near the end it became riveting reading. I look forward to the next installment and I hope down the line to read all seven books.
So, yes, the book is an adequate first parter but I do wonder if Susan Wright has ever really been a fan and devotee of the show. I felt she was writing to some kind of trusted and dry formula. The characters could have had more life in them.