STORY BRIEF:
This is the third book in the Final Prophecy series. It is set three years before doomsday. At that time the lords of the underworld (demons) (Banol Kax) will pierce the barrier and take control of the earth. The Nightkeepers are humans with magic powers who are sworn to protect mankind from the Banol Kax. Iago leads a group of enemy Nightkeepers who court the powers of the underworld. The Nightkeepers gain strength and knowledge through a skyroad to their gods. Prior to this book, Iago's group battled with the Nightkeepers which somehow closed the skyroad. Now both the Nightkeepers and Iago's group are searching for the lost library of their ancestors which will increase their fighting magic and might reopen the skyroad so they can communicate with the gods again.
Sasha's father knew where the lost library was. He was killed. Iago kidnaps Sasha because he thinks she knows where the library is. She doesn't. The Nightkeepers rescue her from Iago and hope to work with her to find the library.
Michael is a Nightkeeper who has an inner demon. When the demon comes forward, he has powerful killing abilities. Michael can usually keep the demon suppressed, but when Sasha is near, the demon becomes active. Michael and Sasha are drawn to each other, but Michael stays away from her because he fears his demon will be unleashed and hurt her.
REVIEWER'S OPINION (WITH MILD SPOILERS):
Most of the story is the Nightkeepers fighting Iago's group and trying to find the lost library, with a romance on the side. I would have liked a little more romantic development, where the couple learns about each other and develops a relationship through interaction. Their romance is almost anti-romance because of Michael's kiss and flee habit. There is a powerful sexual attraction between the two. The few times they kiss, Michael feels the demon inside him waking up, so Michael stops the kissing and leaves her. Sasha's reactions vary from hurt, to confusion, to anger. She labels him as having "commitment issues." The typical romance novel has a couple getting together, having a fight/separation and then getting back together in the end. I'm ok with this formula, but I find many authors are unable to come up with a good or logical reason for the separation, which was a problem with this book as well. The heroine simply changes her mind about the relationship - twice: once to cause the separation and later to get back together. I would have preferred something more substantive.
This book was not easy to read. I felt like I had to work and concentrate to keep track of the many complicated rules. Sometimes the magic works, many times it doesn't. There is always some new reason for it not working - the location they are in, a mark on the skin is interfering, someone else's magic is interfering, the skyroad is closed, or the person hasn't yet learned how to use their magic. A sexual bond or a slave bond also affects how magic will work. I don't mind suspending belief when reading fiction, but some of this was a little too much for me. For example, about once a generation someone is born with a unique killing ability. Sometime during their life the gods will send a message to that person with a task to be done. That person must do it within 9 hours or suffer a penalty. (What's with the 9 hours?) Also, since the skyroad has been closed, there is no communication with the gods. So, it didn't make sense to me that the gods were able to get a message to this person. Also, why wouldn't the gods themselves strike the target dead? Why assign this task to a human? Why create a human with this ability that will only be used once in the human's life? Ok, I know this is fiction. I'm fine with the existence of magic, demons and gods, but I need a little more believability and logic than I'm getting.
DATA:
Story length: 454 pages. Swearing language: strong. Sexual language: mild. Number of sex scenes: 3. Total number of sex scene pages: 15. Setting: 2008 and 2009 Yucatan, Everglades, Florida, Virginia, New Mexico, Texas. Copyright: 2009. Genre: fantasy romance (more fantasy than romance).