on 15 April 2015
A very short story, but with a surprising ending.
What spoiled it was the absence of entire words from semtences. Sometimes, this changed the intended meaning completely, sometimes, it made nonsense.
The authors do not appear to know how to use pronouns at the beginning of a sentence: "He took her arm … " but not having made it clear in the previous sentence or paragraph which "he" is referred to. This is ungrammatical, but it is also sloppy writing and lazy. This makes me wonder whether the missing words are also the product of poor writing; rather than, say, the result of the Kindle conversion process.