Most helpful critical review
on 5 May 2015
I first met John in The Sovereign and later in the Sussex Yacht Club at Shoreham by Sea in the 90's and yes, he liked to drink a lot; but, I think it was more that he needed the company. I must admit that I didn't know anything about Shelley.
I enjoyed reading about him, his partnership with Shelley and the antics they got up to but, oh dear John. Whilst reading I planned to say that you really must get yourself a proof-reader before writing any more books. Then I discover that you have already got some; so now I don't know what to say, except that you need to pay them more!
For impending readers, be prepared for probably the most inconsistent, inaccurate spelling; the total lack of punctuation and the most typos you will have come across in just one short story.
Otherwise, enjoy! Oh, and you may need a box of tissues for Chapter 36.