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on 12 May 2012
This was a good paced book but dont read it if you are looking for an actual 'gripping story'. Its light on the mind and althought it promises erotica really its more about the tension between the main 2 characters. I read this in about an hour and got it because it was free and the genre appeals to me.
I have read harder stuff and if you are looking for a 'turn me on' this is probably not the book.
The plot was okay and other reviews talk about the paragraphing and 'americanisms' - to be fair I dont know why the author bothered to structure these part like that (or at all).
The biggest let down for me is the fact that the next part is £3+ put me off - would certainly not pay that much for the same content.
Overall rating as 4 stars as its good for a freebie.