I bought this book based on the excellent reviews posted. Where do I start?
Introduction by author states this book evolved from a role-playing game and it shows.
Glaring spelling/grammar errors, which if the story is good is not a `make or break it' for me, but these were annoying.
The main story, STEPTEMBER, takes place in 1923. The author has 13 people getting on a plane and flying to Egypt. I don't think so. Lindbergh didn't cross the Atlantic till 1927, alone.
Authors who use names for their characters that all begin with the same letter of the alphabet should be shot. Dawson has triplets as her heroines in the first few stories: Natasha, Natalie & Nicolette. This wound up beyond annoying into the realm of "do I finish this book?"
The mother should be gagged.
The vampire comes out from left field, then he's gone-what's with that? Dropped story line, couldn't figure out where to go with it, what?
Our `heroes' kill a bunch of sleeping people and get a brief talking to and that's it? Why do the wrong people always get killed in these plots.
Way too many poems. Six of them.
Large print, spacing big. This book cost too much.
Interesting effort but lacks polish and it annoyed me.
