SAFER, the new suspense novel from Sean Doolittle, begins simply enough, with Paul Callaway and his wife, Sara, moving from Boston to a quiet Midwestern community. On the first night in their new home, they are the victims of a break-in, which marks the beginning of a paranoid suburban nightmare that strains all suspension of disbelief this reader could muster.
Doolittle uses a shifting timeline to tell the story, alternating between Paul and Sara's early days in the new neighborhood, and the present-day, and the shifts can sometimes be disorienting. In the flashbacks, Paul tells how the break-in caused him to join the local neighborhood watch, part of the massive "Safer Places" organization, run by their neighbor, Roger Mallory. Roger's a retired cop/lunatic control freak, whose son was abducted and killed a decade ago, and he takes the "Watch" part of neighborhood watch VERY seriously. Before long, Paul has run afoul of Roger, and been arrested for crimes allegedly committed against his thirteen-year-old neighbor.
The first half of the book is a tightly-wound little thriller, but by the last fifty pages, my credibility had been strained beyond the breaking point, until SAFER had become an almost INVASION OF THE BODY SNATCHERS-esque exercise in paranoia, where everyone you encounter is a part of the plot against you. The final fate of Paul Callaway ultimately flew in the face of all that had gone before, and no matter how good a book is, if it falls apart at the end, it's got to be considered a failure.