It's 1952 and fifteen year old, Lottie Karla Zimmerman, neighborhood tomboy does not fit in anywhere. She has a couple of friends in the Brooklyn neighborhood but usually feels the taunts and shame from boys and others because of her appearance. Home isn't any better where she tries to shield her much younger sisters from her father's drunken outburst. The only respite at home is when her Father leaves and the rest of the family gathers in front of the TV. On one such night, she is sees a broadcast of a roller derby match.
"Lottie drew even closer to the screen. Something shifted insider of her, thoughts filled with excitement. Images of herself, being one of them, part of an all-girls team awoke within her." Page 9.
Driven by a belief that the women of an all women team would be a family to her as well as a ticket out of a life she does not want, Lottie begins to pursue a future in Roller Derby. A future where she will be hated for being new, physically challenged by the rigorous demands of her sport, and made to suffer in everyway possible as she works to fulfill her dream of being the best at her sport.
What follows is an overall interesting and slow moving read that chronicles the next six years in her life as she finds out first hand that things would be far different than she imagined. Her personal pain, while the reader is repeatedly told how upset she is and how much it hurts, rarely comes through for the reader. Lottie is a somewhat stereotypical character with little development over the years as drawn as are most of the characters throughout the novel. Emotions while depicted repeatedly never really work. This flaw is glaringly obvious early in the novel in regards to the suicide of a friend and fellow teammate and her boyfriend. An area that could have been explored is virtually ignored and while the reader is told how much it hurts, before long Lottie has moved on.
The novel also lacks a significant secondary storyline. While it is not mandatory by any means to have a secondary storyline, if one is begun it should be used throughout the work. In this case the secondary storyline involves the "gruff but kind at heart" rink manager who is used to detail a back-story that abruptly ends without resolution in the first third of the work. That storyline should have been removed since it was not used in order to speed up the work and move Lottie forward in her own story.
A story, despite the criticisms involving the storytelling, is overall interesting. Using her experiences, the author paints a world where Lottie and many of her teammates succeed despite racism, homophobia, economics, injury and a host of other problems. In so doing, the author immerses the reader through extensive detail into the world of the roller derby.
Kevin R. Tipple (copyright) 2006