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4.0 out of 5 stars
Learn how to become a Writer, 28 Jun 2004
By Alun Gwyn Jones - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: Rewriting: A Creative Approach to Writing Fiction (Books for Writers) (Paperback)
Yup, that's Writer with a capital W. It's a state you get to when technique subjugates art, when writing becomes so conscious and scientific every idea, every word, every phrase is so carefully selected and polished it shines from the page, self-satisifed in its own perfection. It's style, it's technique, it's formula, it's... dull.
The author gives many examples which are instructive, but I keep feeling that many of his earlier revisions were better than the final one. He should have stopped rewriting while the thing still had some some soul left in it, before his incessant reworking squeezed out all its life.
On first reading some of his shorts my reaction was, "Boy, this guy knows how to string together a word or two. And he's pretty good with punctuation." But after a while you see it for what it is - follow-the-recipe, pick a point of view, pick a conflict, not-too-much, not-too-little, pick a resolution, tum-tee-tum-tee-tum. And it isn't improved by varying it with bizarre 'creative' ideas - bagpipe playing (!), wives swimming with whales, dream sequences, women with pet lizards.
Perhaps I'm being a bit overly critical, because it really is a nicely written book that makes you snort from time-to-time, with lots of good advice for writing SHORT stories. Only don't follow it to its very logical conclusion. Stop while you still have some juice in you. Above all, don't become a Writer.