I really enjoyed this story. More improtantly though so did the children,it held their attention for the complete story although I did adapt the story for my toddler group. By condensing the story.
Using visual aids,cutting out one large fish and enough small fish for each child to hold during the story. The large fish, which I held, had about a dozen scales cut out of holographic paper, I stuck these on to large fish with velcor spots. Each smaller fish had one velcro spot on. As the story reach the end each scale could be removed allowing the child to transfer it on to their own fish. This gave the toddlers something to focus on.
The intial story has a child friendly moral,easy to understand and is aimed at the over 3's. As stated above it can easily be worded for the younger age group.