As a whole, I found this book rather enjoyable. I debated between three and four stars. There appeared to be several grammatical mistakes, mostly a missing word here and there; nothing major, and I wouldn't say the missing words (most of which were small words-it, of, etc) distracted much from the story, but there were enough to be mentioned. The characters were likable with good character development. Although the descriptions were well written and added to the flow of the story, there were a few sections with too much detail, perhaps useless information, which caused the story to drag a bit. Not that this is an actual issue but something to consider: a bit more creativity to describe the penis would have been nice-perhaps a different term once in a while. Also,a woman on top of a man is hardly naughty, and nowhere near being "nasty." Considering I only paid$2 for this book,I do consider it fairly worth the cost and would consider recommending it.