This book was pretty good, despite what one reviewer wrote earlier. However, the problem with this book is that Young's style, that unpredictablity of where lines are going and coming from gives the reader little to savor. After reading this book I felt as if the whole thing ran straight through me and I was left with no memorable moments. Make no mistake though, Young's poems are refreshing. His style is reminiscent of the improvisatory poems of Koch, Goldbarth, and even the beats to an extent. He exceeds Koch's mediocre works and Goldbarth's pieces in "The Kitchen Sink," but his style begins to wear after you read through 10 or so poems. The syntax just slides down the page and the attention falls with it. It begins to feel too much like half-riffs rather than a cohesive melody... even disjunctive. Pitt. Poetry series is a good series and tends toward the "anti-academic" strain of a Bob Hicok (who is a professor BTW) and Dean Young, the Pitt series is worth checking out if you are tired of the pretentiousness of heavily "academic" poems (ironically it is a college press???).
I do recommend this book if you like whimsical and perhaps coy approaches to poetics. But for Young's poetry it must be remembered that some kinds of poetry you have to hear like a live concert where there is more energy and more mistakes, instead of a studio album that has been rehearsed to death.
-Pietro