Outies (The Mote Series) [Kindle Edition]

"Outies" is a direct sequel to the two Moties novels by Larry Niven and Jerry Pournelle: "The Mote In God's Eye" and "The Moat Around Murcheson's Eye" ("The Gripping Hand" in the USA). Towards the end, it also turns into a sequel to Jerry Pournelle's "King David's Spaceship".
J.R. Pournelle is Jennifer Pournelle, daughter of the aforementioned Jerry. Father and daughter are evidently smart folk, to judge from their writing and from interviews. One wonders, then, why they thought it was a good idea for Pournelle père to write an effusively appreciative cover blurb for this book. And one presumes that they were able to spot that the dedication ("For my father. It's his world, we just try our best to live in it ...") pretty much demands that the reader worry about whether some real-world subtext underlies the obvious reference to the story setting. What's that all about?
"Outies" in set mainly on New Utah, a planet that popped up on the periphery of "Moat Around ..."/"Gripping Hand", but which is now developed in some detail, building on plot elements in the previous book. We meet a couple of people from the previous novels, notably Renner and Blaine, but they don't quite ring true to their previous character. "Outies" introduces a new and interesting protagonist, however, in the world-weary form of Asach Quinn, who is the point-of-view character for a large part of the book. This introduces a writing challenge, because Quinn is both biologically sexless and socially genderless: the entire novel manages to avoid the use of gender-specific pronouns in reference to Quinn. A variety of tricks are used to keep this conceit below the narrative radar, and they're done very well; only occasionally does a phrase seem awkwardly constructed as it weaves around to avoid assigning Quinn a gender. It's a pity, then, that the same effort wasn't applied to weeding out spelling mistakes and a recurring problems with apostrophes. New Brookland Press seems to be a very small publisher (it has apparently produced only this book so far), and I guess that an experienced sub-editor wasn't on hand to rectify this basic sort of stuff. Another typographical distraction is the rendering of the Motie word "Fyunch(click)" from the previous two novels as "Fyunch" plus a not-equal-to sign in this story. Those who know their phonetic alphabet well (or who can read some of the Khoisan click languages) will recognize the not-equal-to sign as representing a palatal click - but I suspect many will find the change more confusing than edifying.
The genderless Quinn seems to be in the story in order to strike a chord with the genderless Moties; but this aspect of the story, when Quinn and Moties finally meet, seems rushed and muddled. It's not really clear how or why an absence of gender would call strongly across the barriers of incomprehension separating alien species - it's rather like suggesting that I should find it easier to relate to a male (rather than a female) octopus.
The occasional use of Moties as point-of-view characters seems like a mistake, especially when Warriors are used in this way. One strength of the previous novels was the *alienness* of the Moties; in this novel, the point-of-view writing makes them come across as mildly eccentric humans. That aside, there's a lot of nice observational writing that's pleasant to read. The description of the dislocating unease that comes from living in a town in the grip of civil insurrection is particularly well done. The book is a mild-mannered hybrid (or perhaps chimera) of political thriller and first-contact SF.
Overall, this is not one to read unless you have the first two Moties novels under your belt, and are interested in seeing a new and quite different take on that old theme.

My title says it all. Mostly new characters on both sides and to say anything else would spoil it for anyone who wants to read it. The Outies are probably the least interesting of the factions in the 'Mote Universe'. Web reviews have noted that it is more a blend of social/hard science fiction than hard science fiction, and I would tend to agree, so if you do purchase be prepare for a different type of book than the original.

I bought the kindle edition,solid sniff-able pages were not available when I ordered,so far I've found one spelling mistake,and the text to speech is robotic and offers strange pronunciation.

The story has only Kevin Renner and Ali Baba performing cameos,with a brief appearance of Lord Blaine,the main plot revolves around the future imagined Mormon religion on New Utah,a frontier world think wild west or Quentin's Patch from "The Mote in God's Eye" writ large,Moties in a primitive form have predated the First Empire,an explanation for more money in the system than there should be IS THE STORY,I could argue you can form this fiction as a 2D Green Eco-Argument or a simplistic outline of politics i the Middle East to stir thinking in young adults if stretched creatively by a Teacher.

The description of a Warrior Motie as a "Tweety Kitty".I thought, "Miffy Books", was amusing and a favourite for me.

I enjoyed it,however it is slow paced compared to "The Moat'/Gripping Hand" and if you were hoping to read about Moties from cover to cover extremely disappointing,the Kindle price at less than a third of the physical version of this tale represents value for money and unfortunately the absorption this story commands.

Three Stars because I have enjoyed it but this is a holiday/commuting/read.