This novel is personal: it puts on paper the life of the author. Others are described from the detached point of view of the sceptical author. Consequently there is very little in the novel that is formal. What is inscribed does not forget the blank of its eye, the author who appears between the lines is not blinded by ideas, but uses words to catch themselves in action. It knows that the writer is not being something, but doing something, and she is concerned to know better what she is doing. This use of words is amusing and difficult; if Stevie Smith could say what she means she would be able to hold a mirror up to her nature and that would be to forget that what we say is what we make of events, we may use ideas to defend ourselves and by so doing deny their actual effect.
What I felt when I read this book is a voice sustained by a rhythm that gives it momentum and this momentum is turned by its own activity. Smith's voice is sometimes directed towards the reader who may not share the reflexivity of the author:
But first, Reader, I will give you a word of warning. This is a foot-off-the-ground novel that came by the left hand. ... And if you are a foot-on-the-ground person, this book will be for you a desert of weariness and exasperation. So put it down. Leave it alone. It was a mistake you made to get this book. You could no know. (p. 38/9)
I take it that a foot-on-the-ground person is someone who believes they can say what they mean; someone for whom the use of words is transparent; i.e. someone who believes what they say and expects to be accepted by others according to the standing that identity is generally accorded. No doubt this is a type of mutuality and gives rise to strong emotions, but this novel shows that for Stevie Smith it is a mutuality that wilfully forgets the work being done to present the image.
It might be expected that the author can point out to the reader a less wilful mutuality, but any such expectations will be disappointed. It seems that a foot-off-the-ground person is condemned to orbit the earth for ever. And their realisation of this brings the desire to die hard on its heels. But does not this book disclose a neighbouring alterity?