one of the big drawbacks of being an editor is reading critically (and I do) so when I come across a book which is badly edited (as this one is) or badly written (which this one is) I get very uptight and the storyline (no matter how good) is spoiled.
That sentence alone should tell any prospective purchaser to beware the brackets. Ms King uses them all the time, ad nauseum. She could so easily have changed the sentences round to exclude them.
The second fault with the book is this:
we are in a society where gay/lesbian is accepted, for the most part. This relationship should have been treated the same as any other, but it isn't, the emphasis all the time is on the lesbian aspect. I did not and do not need it thrown at me all the time. Hint at it, ignore it, have the women live together. socialise together, do what they want together without the reader being told about it.
Because ... what this has done (and I am only half way through - not sure if I will finish it, brackets and all) is to detract from what this book is supposed to be, a crime thriller. It isn't, it's a 'look at us disporting lesbians who might have a murder to solve but that is incidental' book.
Very disappointing. I expected so much more and will NOT, under any circumstances, bother with this lady's work again until someone reassures me that either she learns to write without either of those encumbrances or her editor learns to strip them out and then send the book back and say 'do it like this, please!' which I would have done, had I been editing her work.
(speaking from 32 years of writing and 18 years of editing, before anyone yells I don't know what I am on about...)