Ken Akamatsu has made a living off of underdog boys and the dozens of girls who inexplicably adore them. But he adjusts his formula a little for the first volume of "Negima," a rather careless mixture of "Harry Potter" and his own past comic works.
Newly graduated wizard Negi Springfield arrives in Japan, to be a teacher at a prestigious high school. The fact that he's ten doesn't seem to matter, nor does the fact that his entire class is made up of girls. They immediately decide that he's adorable, sweet and wonderful in every way. The only girl who disagrees is Asuna, a tough orphan with a crush on her former teacher, and a deep dislike of the little boy she has to share her room with.
Negi does his best to win her over, but everything he does seems to go wrong. And even worse, she sees him magically rescue one of the students. Will she expose him as a wizard, and have him turned into a hamster? Or will Negi be able to form a semi-friendship with his new roomie?
The main problem with "Negima's" first volume is that it seems unoriginal, with a Harry Potter lookalike as the hero, and a love-hate relationship straight out of "Love Hina." It's a fun read, but it feels a bit unfocused, as if Akamatsu wasn't yet sure what he wanted the series to be about. Fortunately, things get much better as time goes on.
And Akamatsu's fixation on the female body continues -- there's an entire chapter where every girl is stark naked, with the exception of Asuna. Why? Because the girl with the biggest breasts gets to room with Negi. Moreover, was it really necessary to have Negi's sneezes blow off girls' clothes? Or to have teens crushing on a ten-year-old?
However, Akamatsu does plant the seeds of a good series in the mediocre first volume. Negi learns some lessons about what magic shouldn't be used for, in the spirit of courage and fair play. Not to mention Negi's tribulations as a teacher, despite the fact that he still thinks like a little boy, albeit a mature one. It's a fun dilemma.
And despite his outward resemblance to Harry Potter, Negi is a genuinely likable kid. He makes mistakes, bungles his efforts to be nice, and puts himself in harm's way to rescue someone from being hurt. And Asuna comes across as abrasive and nasty, especially when she blackmails Negi with exposure as a wizard, but grows more sympathetic as the story progresses.
The first volume of "Negima" is a relatively weak effort, but the last few chapters reveal that Akamatsu's new series will probably blossom in the next few volumes.