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on 15 October 2014
This is an example of how not to write and these gems are why:
"Getting r&p'd by a hot guy is a huge turn on for me" WTF????
" He was my daddy, but not my real daddy, mind you" the author didn't think we are sufficiently intelligent to work this out.
"..we both had daddy-son fantasies " I know lots of gay guys use the term 'daddy' and 'boy' but not quite in the writer's context but what do I know?
"spicy citrus scent... called Citron, French for lemon". Do we really need this level of explanation?
"...he would not get married for a while (for homosexual reasons). Surprise!! its supposed to be MM romance
"But, daddy can't you just renounce your title..." I could go on.

The handsome prince meets the pauper incredibly badly told.
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on 15 April 2014
Given that the author compare his work to Jackie Collins, John Grisham and Sidney Sheldon, I went into this book with very high expectations. Sadly, I was supremely disappointed. The principal characters have absolutely no depth or development, and the protagonist comes across as selfish and unlikeable.

Why does the writer keep referring to the sex as gay sex? We know it's gay sex, there's no need to beat us over the head with it. Especially when it's so poorly written.

My advice? Don't waste your time.
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on 25 October 2013
This book was okay but you knew it was unbelievable and fiction. It could not happen in real life. It was rather tedious to read,and finished abruptly.
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on 7 August 2014
I think that small kids can write better novel. action? romance? Danielle Steele? nothing atom above... I spent half an hour to read this, no one will give me back this time...
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on 4 April 2013
A daddy/son relationship between a Prince and and a broke guy, then the shooting starts. A very good short story.
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on 29 January 2014
it needed to be longer and maybe free as I don't see why I should pay but on the whole it was great
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on 20 April 2014
I need the next one I really enjoyed it it was good and sucked me in it was good good
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on 23 September 2014
Utter complete rubbish. It shouldn't be free, they should pay you for reading it.
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on 1 August 2014
WAY TO SHORT........can be read in under 5mins.......
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on 20 August 2014
And I'm the pope! Go to writing lessons!
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