So I downloaded this book thinking that it would be just an average read to keep me going for a day or two.
My impressions? The story is very Twilight, not too much of a problem but for those who want originality it's a huge no and it's no where near as good as Twilight on many levels.
The quality of the writing itself is awful, I would expect this level of writing from someone below the age of 15, the start of the book feels rushed and underdeveloped like it was only written because it had to be there. There could, should, have been so much more characterisation in those starting chapters.
The overall effect, you don't really feel like you're immersed in the story.
Having said this, I liked the story, despite its flaws.
I was sorely disappointed by the number of typos, I find it shocking that books are being released with this number of errors!