To think that I intended for years to read this book! I've slogged through the first ten chapters, and it's a chore to continue.
The novel purports to be a history of the interior life of a member of the rural Roman gentry in the reign of Marcus Aurelius. Not for one moment do I believe that I am reading the history of the thoughts or feelings of a Roman. What it actually is, is a transcript of the hothouse fantasies of a late-Victorian aesthete imagining how neat it would have been if he and his effete friends had been walking around in all those villas, wearing flowing togas. The narrator's story is so suffocatingly self-involved, and takes so many words to say what could be said in about ten words or less, that you find yourself longing for a car chase or an explosion, unfortunately impossible in the age of the Antonines.
I have just encountered one of the biggest howlers of all, a brief episode in which Marius's new friend, Cornelius, a military tribune, passes the time by showing off to Marius every bit of his military gear. How completely asinine. Show me a Roman soldier who ever did such a thing, and I'll eat my hat.
It's ironic that I've come to this book immediately after finishing "Quo Vadis." Now *there* was a book in which, when I read about the elegant, cynical aesthete, Petronius, I believed that I was reading a likely characterization of a recognizable human type, who really could have existed in Imperial Rome. Marius, by contrast, is so busy fondly inspecting his own interior mental state that I'm amazed he notices the outside world at all. And when it does suddenly intrude on his consciousness, as in the episode when an outcropping of rock suddenly crashes where Marius had been walking only moments before, he is so undone by it that he becomes paranoid and begins to imagine that "enemies" are after him!
Here's another irony: the Meditations of Marcus Aurelius is one of my favorite books, and I could probably read Book I once a week without ever growing tired of it. Pater seems to think that Marius is right at home in the age of Marcus, but they are worlds apart, and I can only wish that when Marius reached Rome, Marcus would throw him to the lions or something.
If you want a picture of how Romans in that day thought, read some of their writings, including the Meditations. If you want an example of the literature of the Victorian aesthetes that at least embraces their ethos wholeheartedly and presents an unapologetic picture of their mind-set, read "The Picture of Dorian Gray." But this book--good grief! What a load of namby pamby, piddling, hogwash.