... with her 03/2011 book AFTER THEIR VOWS. This wasn't even worth the 40 pennies library reservation fee that I paid for it.
There is one change in the Michelle Reid staples: the lead for once is not middle-aged (he is 31),BUT he does still 'husk' (used as a verb, non-existent in this context, as in so many of her previous books. Believe me, I have checked, as it bugged me before, but this time, the number of times Anton 'husked' got on my nerves. Is there no editing these days at Mills& Boon? Was he part man, part husky?!).
This is a seen-before tale (her last effort was a blatant copy of a Charlotte Lamb classic), as I suppose most M&B are these days, as there are only so many stories to tell. It's that of Zoe who has just been orphaned, and left to bring up her baby brother Toby (22 years her junior), and her long-estranged Greek grandfather suddenly wants his heir: Toby. Enter Anton, acting on behalf of said grandfather, trying to look out for both the latter's and Zoe's interest. So, of course, he flies her off to his own Greek island, sleeps with her and discovers that she was a virgin and therefore his Greekness demands that they marry, and then takes her to see her grandfather, whom she conveniently starts to like, and who then conveniently reconciles with her before conveniently popping his clogs and leaving her and Toby his fortune. Like I said, seen it, read it before.
What did I most of all not like? Oh, only a few minor surrealities, such as 1) hardly any mention of Zoe's parents' death or funerals, other than in passing - which is strange, given the traumatic and tragic circumstances of their death, which was recent, as Toby is only three weeks old. 2)Toby being flown to Greece on an emergency visa, without a passport, and with his GP apparently breaking all patient confidentiality rules at Anton's say-so, by going behind Zoe's back and providing Anton with a 'fit to travel' certificate, and Social Services seemingly colluding with him too, to allow Toby to be taken out of the UK. 3) Anton then using his super-duper mobile phone to take a picture of Toby (who must have posed very alertly and nicely without any adult help, which is a minor miracle, given that a three-week old wouldn't be able to hold its own head up without assistance), which he then texted to the UK passport office, who then by arrangement allowed a passport to be picked up on Greek soil...really? In whose world? What about having ID pictures certified and forms filled out?? Can readers really be expected to suspend disbelief to this extent?
And what planet was she on with a phrase like SHE STIFFENED UP LIKE A LONG, SLENDER SOLDIER WITH TANGLED GOLDEN HAIR WEARING SKIMPY SHORTS AND A TOP THAT DID ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO HIDE THE LUSH CURVES BENEATH IT. I kid you not: I am quoting verbatim, lack of punctuation and all.
Add to all of the above one very lukewarm and boring main sex scene, and only one other minor one, and this was SO not worthwhile reading.
With this 'effort', MR has gone back to being an old favourite who must remain there firmly in the past. She's unfortunately, IMHO, past her best. Try out Maisey Yates instead - she's a great find courtesy of amazon vine (see my reviews).