Her Fearful Symmetry [Kindle Edition]

I suppose it was always going to be difficult to follow The Time Traveler's Wife. But frankly, even judging this book on its own merits and ignoring Audrey Niffenegger's previous novel this book is strangely lacking.

On the face of it the Her Fearful Symmetry has potential. It's the story of a ghost (Elspeth) haunting her old flat which she's left to her twin nieces (Julia and Valentina), while hiding a deep, dark secret. This sets the scene for what could become a dark, sinsister ghost story, but actually seems to be a weird, convoluted, supernatural soap opera which feels like it's building up to something, never really makes good on that promise and then sort of trails off towards the end, leaving the reader feeling largely indifferent.

There's very little believability in any of the characters. We are told that Elspeth's lover Robert is grief-stricken, but I don't think it actually comes across to the reader that well. In fact on the whole, grief is depicted very weakly throughout the entire novel so that the characters come across as fairly vague, shallow and two-dimensional and impossible to relate to.

Nevertheless, Her Fearful Symmetry starts off with promise. Elspeth dies and becomes a ghost and then the twins move into the haunted flat and set about finding their feet in London in a slightly aimless way. Julia makes friends with the man in the flat upstairs, Martin, who sets crosswords and has OCD. Robert meanwhile spends his days stalking the twins, before finally meeting them and taking a liking to Valentina. It's all a bit odd and truth be told a bit dull and flat, but then they discover Elspeth's haunting the flat and I started to think it might be going somewhere.

And then it just gets silly. Elspeth's deep, dark secret is frankly laughable. Utterly, utterly bizarre, completely unbelievable and also completely unneccessary. It doesn't really have any impact on the story or any of the characters and just doesn't make sense. And as if that wasn't enough Elspeth and Valentina concoct a plan so completely stupid and insane that it beggars belief. I don't want to give too much away so I won't go into the details but suffice to say this plan is complete madness. And then they rope Robert in and even though he realises it's the worst plan ever he somehow feels compelled to go along with it for reasons that are never really explained.

The whole thing seems ill-conceived and the events of the 'plot' often seem to happen randomly. It feels like a collection of interesting ideas that have been crammed into one novel, regardless of whether they actually add anything to the book. There's too much going on and it all seems fairly irrelevant.

On the whole, it's quite a frustrating book to read because somehow you feel it should have been so much better. Not just because of the success of The Time Traveler's Wife but also because there are some ideas here that could have potentially been turned into a decent novel. Instead it feels thrown together and badly thought out. A slapdash effort from an author we know can write better.

...Then I could go back and visit myself and make sure I don't bother reading 'Her Fearful Symmetry'. 'The Time Traveller's Wife' is one of my all time favourite books, but this novel is as bad as that was good.

Things start well, and I thought I was in for another treat. Reading Niffenegger's prose is effortless. She has a an exquisite way of paring down emotions, without becoming bogged down in flowery language. The main emotions that run through this book are love, grief and the claustrophobia of life.

The novel centres around 'mirror' twins, Valentina and Julia, who are identical but inverted. They inherit a London flat from their Aunt (Elspeth), who is the estranged twin of their mother (Edie). The reasons for this estrangement are 'dark', 'mysterious' and - oh yes - 'wholly predictable'. In the flat below where the twins live, resides Robert, their Aunt's former lover, and a historian with an interest in Highgate Cemetery. The third resident in the block, and by far the most interesting character in the book, is Martin, a reclusive crossword-setter, whose wife has recently left him, unable to cope with his OCD. If the book had been more about these two, I think it may have been a many-splendoured thing.

Most of the book follows the twins as they explore London, free from their parents, and offers an interesting perspective on the life of identical twins. If you have spent your entire life together, how do you gain independence from one another, without shattering a unique relationship? Not being a twin myself, I have no idea who accurate a depiction this is, but I found it thought-provoking and moving. It's a shame the same can't be said for the rest of the book.

It's hard to explain why the book is so bad without giving away important plot points, but it will be no great surprise that somewhere along the line there are some twin-swapping shenanigans, hardly the most innovative of plot devices. (Also, despite her assertions to the contrary, the author kept muddling the names of the twins in question here, making for a very confusing read.) The structure of the novel is all over the place. The time-frame jumps forward abruptly with little or no reason, making the novel feel disjointed. Considering that the 'TTTW' flows so well, despite its wildly altering time-frame, this is inexcusable.

Robert is a terrible character, who has the most unreal friends. Essential to the plot is an act that in normal society would see Robert pilloried by everybody that knew him (and this is before all the ghost stuff), yet nobody says anything about it all. The whole latter half of the book is based on the flakiest of premises. Worse still, Niffenegger forces her characters to fit the novel's events without subtlety. They move towards their various dooms like automatons; there is no sense of character development or any plausible reason why the players act like they do.

Then comes the ghost story, which starts interestingly enough, but eventually descends into implausible farce. In 'TTTW', the concept fitted into our reality with the minimum of artistic licence, but here we are asked to swallow a much bigger pill, and I found it impossible. The novel's twist, I saw coming from a long way off, which probably didn't help, but the whole thing stank of a rejected Stephen King storyline. The only good thing I found in this section, was the novel's conclusion, which I know a lot of people didn't like. I thought the abrupt ending was strong, and in keeping with the self-absorption the characters had displayed during the rest of the novel.

In summary this is a terrible novel, one which should do serious damage to Niffenegger's status as a serious literary novelist. The only thing to come out of this novel with an enhanced reputation is Highgate Cemetery, which is depicted with a great deal of care and attention. It is sounds like a fascinating place, filled with history and stories. This story however, is not worth the cover price.

I quite enjoyed the first part of the book, there was a gothic, gloomy feel to it that I thought was going to make a spooky unsettling read. However, the latter part of the book just spiraled into such ridiculous ideas that I lost all respect for it. The ghost element of the book actually seemed more likely than other parts of the plot, the fact that one twin would rather die/be resurrected than stand up to her sister and have her own life is beyond me. As was the fact that a learned man such as Robert would go along with such a plan rather than call a doctor and have the twin committed!.

I kept on reading to find out about the twins mothers past, as this seemed like a good mystery - only to find out she did something just as ridiculous with her twin! Swapping places with her twin, getting together with her husband and falling pregnant by him, then swapping back with her twin after the girls were born and pretending to be each other for years... I was bored and couldn't be bothered to really think about it in the end.

The best parts of the book was the sub plot about Martin and the realistic portrayal of OCD, I did enjoy reading about him slowly overcoming this to find happiness and a new lease of life. The other good part of the book was the information about Highgate cemetery and its occupants, the history of the cemetery was better told by the author than her own story! I may even consider visiting the cemetery, as it was the only part of the book that left me with any lingering thoughts ... doesn't say much for the plot does it?

Overall, could have been a good gothic thriller, but it just leaves feeling as if you've wasted your time slogging through silly storylines.