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he came he saw he fixed more stuff. . .again
on 16 May 2014
This like the first book really is far too long, the first half of this book should have been edited down to about half or less of it's current length, it just is too slow. The worst thing is as the plot should be picking up pace to some sort of battle it changes down and pointlessly repeats itself. One more morphing arm and I may put it down for good. really books one and 2 could be condensed down to one moderate length story of about 350 pages, there is just not enough plot to support more pages without extensive repetition. I will put it down unfinished at some point it is just a question of when.