Extremely poor writing and complete historical inaccuracy. The characters are all zero-dimensional, which is the number of stars I'd give this book if I could, and utterly unbelievable. The series does not improve in the final book from the first and second instalments, but remains consistently terrible throughout. The writing is wooden and frankly, awful. If you thought the dialogue was repetitive in book one, you're in for a mind-numbing time here as, yes, they're still having the same conversations in this book as they did in the first one! Almost word for word in some cases. The characters consist of annoying Ahhotep and her bland buddies, plus supervillain Apophis and his creeping minions. They had no depth, no pathos, not remotely resembling a complex, living, breathing real person at all. Much of the action is pure fantasy, and badly written fantasy at that. I like to write more in my reviews usually, but there was literally nothing I could find to praise about this book. I would warn people interested in ancient Egypt away from this book.