Sam took the plunge and made an appointment with Mistress Raven. His first experience in the BDSM community opens his eyes, but he knows he is learning from the best. Will he go back for more?
Sam had enough confidence to call for an appointment with Mistress Raven. But, I liked how he wasn't sure what he was getting himself into when his session started. Unfortunately, other than fantasizing about a session, there is no other motivation for his actions. Since this nano short is told in Sam's perspective, Mistress Raven has little to no personality, expect her mistress attitude.
The plot is Sam learning the BDSM ropes. Sadly, I felt the story read more like a draft, with bad editing and many incomprehensible sentences towards the end.
Pass on First Bondage. With bad editing and flat characters, this nano short lacks the fun component most stories of this length possess.
BookingIt Grade: D
