I really enjoyed the first book in this series. David's writing style is somewhat entertaining. Although some parts of the first book did get bogged down in detail although it was entertaining nonetheless.
The second book carries on where the first one left off, and is an interesting read, but when the party get to their final destination, the book gets into such a bogged down slow pace of events described in such detail I found it difficult to get through.
This book should have been half its length, it felt as if the author set a goal for a number of pages, and strung out the story to fill them.
The author has a lot of talent, his writing style is one of the most entertaining I have yet to experience, and his vocabulary is superb. Hopefully in his future books he can stop being bogged down in so much thought and detail and provide more action and change and events that the first book in the series did a better job of doing.