Matthew Stokoe's new novel is quite a departure from his previous work, High Life. Much more subdued and not nearly as shocking, Empty Mile tells the tale of Johnny Richardson, a man seeking reconciliation from his past transgressions. Upon his return home, Johnny finds out that making up for past sins is an exercise in futility. His life, and the lives of those he has affected, have changed too much in his 8 year departure for there to be a clean break with the past.
What's striking is the normative setting of this book: small town America, dad and his two sons, embittered friend whom Johnny betrays, and finally, the fine young lass that was left behind during the 8 year departure. What Johnny comes to realize is that much has happened during that time. Life has a way of delivering tragedy and despair to those who are already weak and broken. A pitfall of constant struggle pervades some characters in this book, almost to the tune of a lockstep measure.
What's troubling is that some characters are so clearly defined. The mentally challenged brother is painted in ways that seem true to form, given the nature of a childhood accident. At the same time though Stokoe borders on stereotypes of mentally handicapped folks, that Stan (Johnny's brother), almost comes off as comical when he's clearly not meant to be. Marla, the aforementioned lass, is so incredibly weak as a person, any slight push can get her to do the most unmentionable acts...to the point of total disbelief. This brings us to Johnny himself. Hands down the most unredeemable, emotionally, physically and mentally vapid character in the book, our narrator, is a door mat. The tone is set quickly that he acts completely out of a sense of self...and the repercussions of this particular act have lifetime reverberations. But this is clearly not just a metaphor for how his life will unfold. Stokoe paints a picture of man totally devoid of loyalty, who is completely incapable of standing up to any sort of transgression (or person) in his life, and as a result, he watches as his world crumbles around him and allows decisions to be made that have horrific consequences for those he attempts to love.
The main narrative is set against the back drop of Empty Mile, a piece of land purchased by Johnny and Stan's father. The more interesting part of the book is the aspect of prospecting for gold that is introduced through this land and how it ties back to Gareth (Johnny's ex-pal), the local community writ large and the long term hope that Empty Mile represents for most everyone in the book. While this piece is fine, and most stories need some sort of salvific measure for us to work toward, Empty Mile (the land) is overshadowed by such wholly unbelievable situations that it simply cannot, and does not, tie the book together.
Clearly frustrating and at once a long-feeling read, Empty Mile did arouse such physical responses in me to certain situations in the book, I got the feeling that Stokoe is a master of showing how ordinary people are completely capable of some really horrendous stuff (see his previous work). While there is plenty of that going on in Empty Mile, Stokoe's other work shows how shocking can be done without doing it for the sake of shock value. Unfortunately, in Empty Mile, most of what is shocking just wreaks of being unbelievable. I had incredibly high hopes for this book and teeter on liking certain portions, but ultimately found this to be an unrewarding read.