I found the first of Victoria Connelly's "Darcy" books (Weekend with Mr. Darcy) to be cute, and the characters relatively enjoyable. So I went ahead and bought the second and third books. The second one is unfortunately not as well done as the first. It's not horrible, but it's definitely not as well done. Much like the first, there are three main characters we follow, Kay, Adam, and Gemma with others thrown in for flavor. All three of them are Jane Austen fans, and they all end up involved in the filming of a new version of Persuasion.
The story starts out with Kay, and she seems a promising character at first, but quickly becomes very hard to like much. For a woman who is likely in her 30s (I don't remember her exact age being given, but the details of her life would lead me to think she's at least 30), she acts more like she's 14 or 15. She is constantly having slightly ridiculous daydreams about her and the leading man from the movie, Oli. Even when things seem to be rather obviously not what she's hoping for and dreaming about, she'll still convince herself with yet another daydream. Sure, everyone daydreams, but the extend of Kay's start to seem foolish. And between those daydreams and the way she flutters about seeming a bit brainless at times, I'm felt like she should be a lot younger than she really is.
Adam is more enjoyable, though for him it's love at first sight with Kay and her "toffee-colored hair". And trust me, you will eventually be tired of Kay's "toffee-colored hair". My primary annoyance with him is probably the same one his grandmother has - just tell the girl! She's fluttering around like a fool over the movie star and trying to hook Adam up with Gemma, but he can't seem to get it out that he likes Kay, not Gemma. Of course, his inability to tell her might not seem as slightly ridiculous as it does if it wasn't for her fluttering all over and barely noticing him at all.
Gemma is the one I wish had been more of a focus than Kay. She's just a bit more interesting, and her personality is a lot less annoying than Kay's. She still has her own flaws, as she's so timid through most of the book that it's not funny, but she's still more enjoyable. She's the leading lady in the movie, but not sure if movies are what she really wants to do, and is the daughter of a formerly famous actress who has spent her life pressuring Gemma. Frankly, I'd rather have heard more about Gemma and her life than constantly watched Kay make a fool of herself. Plus, while Gemma of course ends up with her own romance, romantic interest, and happy ending, we don't get to find out what she finally ends up doing other than the vague information given towards the end, which was a disappointment. At least with the main characters in the previous "Darcy" book we got a sort of epilogue for them all.
So again, it's not awful, and it's an okay read, and you could argue it's a modern attempt at Jane Austen's Emma, but it's just not as well done as Emma. And frankly, I don't remember finding Emma to be quite such an airhead. The speed with which people fall in love in this book seems a bit abrupt as well. I'd recommend this as a library book or on sale, as I don't think it's quite worth what I paid for it. And I'd definitely recommend Weekend with Mr. Darcy over this one. This one just falls a bit flat compared to the first book this "trilogy" and could have been done so much better than it was. I had higher expectations after the first book. It's okay, but it's nothing fabulous.